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Dont look back- Titan by ~tishtopia:icontishtopia:





When you walk out the door
please just keep on walking
don't look back
because that look kills me

Sing the melancholy of my broken heart
take away this pain
fill my life with fun once more
or just leave and don't look back

When you leave us behind
please just keep on leaving
don't slow down
because that slow down kills us  

When you disappear from us
please just keep on going
don't turn back
because we will miss you too much.

When you begin your training
do not ease up
just keep on fighting for your dream
and some day our paths will once again meet
©2007-2009 ~tishtopia
:icontishtopia:

Author's Comments

Friend of mine is leaving for a couple of years to South Australia, got an AIS scholarship to play volleyball. Hes been one of my best mates and i wish him all the best for the olympics. You will be missed Pinkie.

The poem itself has no form, cause if i tried to give it form it would take me alot longer. oh and Shauna says she will miss u too.

Farewell buddy.


EDIT: Added last stanza

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:iconwitchybabe:
everyone loves trent
spesh me.=(
:iconashville:
took me a while to remember my password, then i remembered your fetish:p

sweet poem, trent'll be heaps missed, best of luck bud!!!!
:icontishtopia:
your paword is asians? jkz... maybe pilots, but then that would be lying

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<3Tish
:iconlukozade:
Very nice poem Greg. We will miss you Trent. :(
:icondogolas:
Nice Poem Greg. We will miss you Trent, but you're doing something you enjoy, even though you've split, all roads eventually meet back up. So like Greg's poem keep heading forward, don't look back, we'll be travelling the road together again one day. Congrats on the scholorship btw :).
:iconneubauten:
bon voyage, bon chance

nice poem, good luck trent, enjoy yourself and that is half the battle

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I think, therefore I... doh... what was the question?

go :gallery: [link] or [link]
:iconcatheena:
Lovely poem
shall miss you trent
Cathy
:icondogolas:
I've got the card posted on the web Greg.

Enjoy everyone here is the [link] .

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